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Bongo Comics Group => Fan Works => Topic started by: BartManFan on August 16, 2012, 12:16:45 AM

Title: "Rain of the Bartmen"
Post by: BartManFan on August 16, 2012, 12:16:45 AM

Hello, I am new to the site and just wanted to introduce myself, I have loved the simpsons all my life and my first bongo comic was Bartman #1 at eight years old. After that I became entranced even more so with the simpsons since i was already a comic book geek XD. I am an artist/ techie type of person and am currently working on a bartman fan story.

This is based loosely on the sketch a certain fan named Kyle Carroza did that was displayed in Bartman #6.

I am basing my fanstory loosely on this sketch and calling the story line "The Death Of Bartman".

Don't worry its not as gritty as it sounds but want to pay homage both to superman and Bartman at the same time.

(http://media-cache-ec2.pinterest.com/upload/528539706237919204_nPYmOrK7.jpg)

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9/27/2012 - Just putting up the covers so people can see them, finally got them done, was a little lazy with issue 11 >_<...

They are a bit too big to put up on here so i'll just put a hyper link for them.

http://media-cache-ec3.pinterest.com/upload/528539706237986647_2pB6SxOL.jpg (http://media-cache-ec3.pinterest.com/upload/528539706237986647_2pB6SxOL.jpg)

Title: Re: "Rain of the Bartmen"
Post by: BartManFan on September 11, 2012, 12:10:33 AM

Here is the color lineup for some of the main characters of my story. -_-


(http://media-cache-ec5.pinterest.com/upload/528539706237950530_BfOlAP2q.jpg)

Title: Re: "Rain of the Bartmen"
Post by: BartManFan on September 22, 2012, 06:45:15 AM

Here is the first cover I have drawn for my fanfiction series, even though its like the fourth issue of my series  :-\

I would really like to hear on what you'all think, my series is supposed to take place after the last Bartman issue with some of the elements of the ongoing Bartman stories in Bart Simpson comics and Simpsons spectacular.

(http://media-cache-lt0.pinterest.com/upload/528539706237972647_lBlXTqqU.jpg)

Title: Re: "Rain of the Bartmen"
Post by: Leif on September 22, 2012, 09:33:30 AM

That's pretty good for a first attempt. The leaning buildings makes the picture look very dynamic. Lisa is well done. Looking quite dramatic.
But there are a few details if you are not going to make your one style. ( We all do it :P ) The hair spikes has to be more pointy and the lines in the arms / legs more straight. But all in all a good picture.

Title: Re: "Rain of the Bartmen"
Post by: BartManFan on September 23, 2012, 05:46:36 AM

Cool, thank you very much for the feedback, I will keep that in mind, I should be putting up the rest of the covers for my fanfic soon.  :)